Hey!
The writing really carried this through, and I actually watched the whole thing. The backgrounds were pretty nice too. It's main downfall was the rather inconsistent graphic/sound quality (ZOMG I just read that you're going to explode now... :3). I seriously think if you tightened up the graphics a bit this would be loved by a lot of people, even if you animated it the same way. I almost closed it after the first 30 seconds because of them, but I'm glad I didn't.
I think my favorite part was the intro with the song. That was really really great, you have good timing in both the comedic sense and animation sense.
I know you think you're done making cartoons, but I don't believe you. So when you do come back, seriously, spend some time updating your character graphics. You're writing ability deserves it.