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That was BRILLIANT!! Iz all like RAWR!
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That was BRILLIANT!! Iz all like RAWR!
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I like it.
It sounded pretty good, had a nice tone. I think it was well organized too. I think it could use some better mixing, though.
There were a lot of surprises in the second half of the song, too! That kept it fresh.
[: Much Appreciation, man. I wanted it to be a little more random and "surprise-ful" than most of my other fairly-repetitive songs. And like I said to Rm7766 below you, I understand its a bad mix, just read my reply to him for an explanation, haha. Glad to hear its fresh, glad that you enjoyed it. Next will be better [:
Hmm
The bass in the background reminded me a lot of the battle theme from Chrono Trigger, haha. Overall, I love the feel of it, but I think it could really use some stronger drums.
Thanks for the comments! I'll consider that for my next song. About the drums, i lost all my samples on PC reinstall, that was the best i have. Still seeking now, heh...
Hey, this is good!
The title makes it sound like it's going to be calm, lol. I actually really liked it, though, it IS calming in a way, even though it still feels frenetic. I took off a point because despite the fact that you were able to make it interesting the whole way through and how well it's mixed, it did feel a bit tired right off the bat, being tied so firmly to conventions. If you're really only 13, as your profile says, though, you have plenty of time to find your own voice.
I am 13. I appreciate your reveiw. Thank you.
Actually, I like it!
I don't know much about rap, so I don't know how well I can critique you, but this sounds pretty pro to me. The only thing I'd say is that in some places your enunciation doesn't match the intensity of the synths so it feels like it mushes a bit (the spot I noticed this the most was the "If you're from the south let me hear your rebel yell" part). I think it stuck out the most there because the rest of the song was so well done, though.
Could also just be a preference thing, though. To me rap lyrics should have all the smack and nuance of a full drumset.
I know exactly what you mean fam. This actually is going to be re-recorded because the chorus didn't sound "hype" enough for the energy of the track. Actually, the whole track didn't sound hype enough. But I'm definitely aware of the flaws in the track and will fix that my next studio session. Appreciated!
Stay up,
Nimbus The General
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Holy crap this is creepy and amazing!
thanks dude :D damn you for beeing in another timezone
Hmmm
Well, you nailed the style, but I've heard this same song about a million times before. Even so, it did make me get up and DANCE; hhich is the most important thing, I guess.
I've heard it a million times too, but I just had to have a go
Amazing
This is, like, pro level stuff! Amazing work! Moar plz?
I will make more! Thanks!
God...
This song is so underrated, dude. I can't stop listening to it! It's amazing!
Thanks man!
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