Like a kung fu movie - great fighting, no plot...
I liked the fighting, especially the guy hitting the screen. I was lawling! But the plot section was boring and I didn't understand what they were saying.
I also didn't get the random car driving away, but I'm guessing I have to watch the other episodes.
It was so tiny...
The 3D was great, but it was all pixelated and the screen was TINY! It kind of ended suddenly too.
It was a good concept though!
Uhhh, creepy...
I liked the graphical style. It helps with the creepiness of it all. The flashes of gore were a nice touch. It was kind of like a Salad Fingers episode... Needs some more movement though...
The sound was terrible thought. Too quiet and a little hard to understand...
Good Preview
YAY, Sprites!! I love sprite animations, and the 3D flying ship was amazing. (Unless you just ripped that from a movie. Then it wasn't as amazing...)
It was kind of short, even for a preview, but I got a good idea of the story.
The sound and style is lower because, yes the music was good, but some voice acting would be nice too, especially if you are going to make it into a longer movie later.
Three letters, WTF?
The graphics were good. They would have been great if they moved a little more and you did lip syncing.
The randomness would have been a plus if it was funny, but the tongue thing at the end was just kind of odd... Kind of funny, but still very odd...
The voices were hard to understand most of the time. Especially from the Mexican dude with the weird tongue...
Yeah, when I was making it I had sketched out an idea for it but didnt really know what to do with it, I also did 90% of it in one sitting and started getting frustrated with the mexican guys tongue and just started saying "fuck it". It was intended to be better animated and I suck at lip-synching plus my microphone sucks. Sorry you coulndt understand it, I'll add subtitles next time.
It was OK.
If you are going to do a clock crew bit, you should use the electronic voices!
I bumped the sound rating for the "Gorillaz Music." I lurv those Gorillaz!
The humor was pretty good, but it should be a little snappier. Make the punchlines lightning fast (you can even use the crack of a whip, like in Tiny Plad Ninjas or Dad's Home).
Overall it was OK. I'll watch for more of your stuff; I liked some of your ideas.
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Well, it was OK...
The sound was very low and kinda lame. I would use some HAWT RAGING techno!
Also, make it more spastic. The lines could smash into each other and turn into fifty lines that start a little war with laser beams that change their color and then they all merge to make one big line that eats some wormholes in the screen and another line comes along and falls into the hole and then he get attacked by a Technicolor square that eats him and explodes-
Ok I'll stop.
Just do more with your idea next time, assuming you are going to do a third one.
Well some pretty good ideas and thanks.
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