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44 Reviews | 19 w/ Responses
This is really cool! I love how huge, yet, simple it is.
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I don't know much about rap, so I don't know how well I can critique you, but this sounds pretty pro to me. The only thing I'd say is that in some places your enunciation doesn't match the intensity of the synths so it feels like it mushes a bit (the spot I noticed this the most was the "If you're from the south let me hear your rebel yell" part). I think it stuck out the most there because the rest of the song was so well done, though.
Could also just be a preference thing, though. To me rap lyrics should have all the smack and nuance of a full drumset.
Author's Response:
I know exactly what you mean fam. This actually is going to be re-recorded because the chorus didn't sound "hype" enough for the energy of the track. Actually, the whole track didn't sound hype enough. But I'm definitely aware of the flaws in the track and will fix that my next studio session. Appreciated!
Stay up,
Nimbus The General
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The mix/mastering is great on this! It's really powerful.
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Holy crap this is creepy and amazing!
Author's Response:
thanks dude :D damn you for beeing in another timezone
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Well, you nailed the style, but I've heard this same song about a million times before. Even so, it did make me get up and DANCE; hhich is the most important thing, I guess.
Author's Response:
I've heard it a million times too, but I just had to have a go
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This is, like, pro level stuff! Amazing work! Moar plz?
Author's Response:
I will make more! Thanks!
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Bleep blorp.
I loved the little beatboxing break, made me lawl.
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This song is so underrated, dude. I can't stop listening to it! It's amazing!
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Thanks man!
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I loved the ending after the pause. The beginning wasn't as good and kinda gimmicky (IMHO), I'd rather have a whole song like that without the beginning part. Something about the mix made my ears feel weird. Kind of like when you're in a totally silent room and it hurts your ears. Maybe it just needs something to fill out the sound.
Author's Response:
"Maybe it just needs something to fill out the sound"
thats exactly the problem of this song its too empty
needs all those little things
by the way loooove the valley
was maybe the only reson i kept playing that game till end
cus i always thought how great that trac was written
anyways you should really check out my other track cus really i dont know how this got 2. place
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This is really fun to listen to! I love the melodies and the synths, and the bass is so smooth. It has an over-compressed sound to it though, like when the bass kicks in everything else kind of falls down for a second then warbles up and down. I noticed it in your Sonic Colors song too (I've had that in my playlist for a while now).
It's a distinct sound, and it works well in a few spots on the song, but it also seems to flatten it out a bit.
Author's Response:
yeah this was very compressed :) mainly beacause it was done on reason and i'm much more comfortably with logic, to tell you the truth i am terrible at mixing, but i'm going to work on that :D
thanks for the review
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